Thank you! I loved every single second of it.
thanks for the work, I noticed some errorspg 21, "I have the power defend myself", should be "to defend myself"pg 29, "I'm a person will not die", should be "that will not die"
I dont know if you got my comment. I noticed some errors.pg 21 "the power defend myself" (to defend)pg 29 "I am a person will not die" (that will not die)
Thank you! I loved every single second of it.
ReplyDeletethanks for the work, I noticed some errors
ReplyDeletepg 21, "I have the power defend myself", should be "to defend myself"
pg 29, "I'm a person will not die", should be "that will not die"
I dont know if you got my comment. I noticed some errors.
ReplyDeletepg 21 "the power defend myself" (to defend)
pg 29 "I am a person will not die" (that will not die)